Reading over the comments put on my paper and also the rubrics that went along with assignment really helped me understand what I needed to do in later papers. I had to many grammatical errors and I was a little to opinion based on my topics in the paper. I got a little sloppy at times in my paper and it effected my grade. Going to the walc and getting a few tips on how to better my paper would of helped.
“I makes you wonder why things are that way and how you can change them. I feel that this song did that for a lot of people.it made them really listen to the words of the song and think about the situations involved in the song.” This was a sentence I put into my Rhetorical Analysis Final Draft and you commented it was a run on. To change that I one’ should of went to the walc so they could of helped me out in some areas. I would change the sentence to “I makes you wonder why things are that way and how you can change them. I feel that this song did that for a lot of people. It made them really listen to the words of the song and think about the situations involved in the song.”
On my Midterm there was only one comment and i would change that by changing my in-text citation to (No Part for Racism, Hemmer) and (No Benefit of the Doubt, Hemmer).
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